Comments for balls http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Thu, 16 Nov 2006 01:31:31 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Research Project by Vincent http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/11/15/research-project/#comment-18 Vincent Thu, 16 Nov 2006 01:31:31 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/11/15/research-project/#comment-18 I like your essay idea. The condom commercials are a good topic. Maybe narrow down to one condom brand like Trojan. Its a great idea. You have plenty of good thoughts and good resources. Keep looking around and it should be good. Get some more sources i didnt see really any specifics. Other than that sounds like its going to be good. I like your essay idea. The condom commercials are a good topic. Maybe narrow down to one condom brand like Trojan. Its a great idea. You have plenty of good thoughts and good resources. Keep looking around and it should be good. Get some more sources i didnt see really any specifics. Other than that sounds like its going to be good.

]]> Comment on Research Project by rachell http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/11/15/research-project/#comment-17 rachell Thu, 16 Nov 2006 00:17:50 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/11/15/research-project/#comment-17 - I think you need to narrow down on a topic? you are talking about ways to advertise and at the same time different types and it's confusing? but overall its a good topic. -It seems like you've done alot of research, finding those articles and all, good job! -you di dn't really site the sources! but they seemed to go well with your argument -make a definite argument more clearly. and yes! i want to read your paper becuase it's something that no one has thought of before! - I think you need to narrow down on a topic? you are talking about ways to advertise and at the same time different types and it’s confusing? but overall its a good topic.

-It seems like you’ve done alot of research, finding those articles and all, good job!

-you di dn’t really site the sources! but they seemed to go well with your argument

-make a definite argument more clearly. and yes! i want to read your paper becuase it’s something that no one has thought of before!

]]> Comment on Research Project by Kristin Gauta http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/11/15/research-project/#comment-16 Kristin Gauta Wed, 15 Nov 2006 23:22:44 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/11/15/research-project/#comment-16 I think your general topic will be a good research paper, but I'm a little confused as to what argument you are making. I think the argument on how the advertising of condoms has shifted in its appeal to a greater audience is the strongest one you make, and from there you can add the article about women and other audiences like maybe younger generations. So far, your research is interesting, and once you make your final argument, it'll decide whether or not those support it. I think the one about women would be really good to ad in your paper because it shows how women are becoming a target audience & you could discuss why that is. Yes, I would want to read this reasearch paper because it is something that I had not thought of and now that you bring it up, I think you make some interesting points. I think your general topic will be a good research paper, but I’m a little confused as to what argument you are making. I think the argument on how the advertising of condoms has shifted in its appeal to a greater audience is the strongest one you make, and from there you can add the article about women and other audiences like maybe younger generations. So far, your research is interesting, and once you make your final argument, it’ll decide whether or not those support it. I think the one about women would be really good to ad in your paper because it shows how women are becoming a target audience & you could discuss why that is. Yes, I would want to read this reasearch paper because it is something that I had not thought of and now that you bring it up, I think you make some interesting points.

]]> Comment on Pictures by stephaniecrowe http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/10/04/pictures/#comment-15 stephaniecrowe Wed, 04 Oct 2006 22:16:38 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/10/04/pictures/#comment-15 I like the picture of the two Muslim women. It was an original and unique idea. And who is Janet Reno? I like the picture of the two Muslim women. It was an original and unique idea.
And who is Janet Reno?

]]> Comment on Pictures by lexydeg http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/10/04/pictures/#comment-14 lexydeg Wed, 04 Oct 2006 22:13:14 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/10/04/pictures/#comment-14 The first photo is very good in how you contrast what the American ideal of what a woman should be like versus that of a different culture. It would be a great idea to expand upon Janet Reno....true to that The first photo is very good in how you contrast what the American ideal of what a woman should be like versus that of a different culture. It would be a great idea to expand upon
Janet Reno….true to that

]]> Comment on Pictures by kwadkins http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/10/04/pictures/#comment-13 kwadkins Wed, 04 Oct 2006 22:11:34 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/10/04/pictures/#comment-13 I think that picture of Janet Reno is very nice. She is definitely not a typical female romodel of female beauty. Nice choices I think that picture of Janet Reno is very nice. She is definitely not a typical female romodel of female beauty. Nice choices

]]> Comment on Pictures by mikebrouillette52 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/10/04/pictures/#comment-12 mikebrouillette52 Wed, 04 Oct 2006 22:10:13 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/10/04/pictures/#comment-12 I agree that Janet Reno would fit Douglas' mold for what an American woman should look like. Some one who is happy with their body and does not need all sorts of artificial substances to help make them feel better. I agree that Janet Reno would fit Douglas’ mold for what an American woman should look like. Some one who is happy with their body and does not need all sorts of artificial substances to help make them feel better.

]]> Comment on 2nd Questions – #3 by prof Groom http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/09/10/2nd-questions-3/#comment-11 prof Groom Wed, 20 Sep 2006 21:29:14 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/09/10/2nd-questions-3/#comment-11 Ryan, Where is your blog post on Berger? Ryan,

Where is your blog post on Berger?

]]> Comment on 2nd Questions – #3 by Rachel http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/09/10/2nd-questions-3/#comment-10 Rachel Wed, 13 Sep 2006 22:17:34 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/09/10/2nd-questions-3/#comment-10 Dear Ryan, You are completely right. I don't know about you but i definitely hate working with something that I can't prove is right. Maybe that's why I want to be a science major? Rachel Dear Ryan,

You are completely right. I don’t know about you but i definitely hate working with something that I can’t prove is right. Maybe that’s why I want to be a science major?

Rachel

]]> Comment on 2nd Questions – #3 by prof Groom http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/09/10/2nd-questions-3/#comment-9 prof Groom Wed, 13 Sep 2006 21:51:20 +0000 http://ryanpayne.wordpress.com/2006/09/10/2nd-questions-3/#comment-9 Excellent point, there is no way to measure a "real experience" - so how do we understand Percy's idea of trying to recover the authenticity of experience given what you have said above? Excellent point, there is no way to measure a “real experience” – so how do we understand Percy’s idea of trying to recover the authenticity of experience given what you have said above?

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